Sta.sh
It's amazing how one person can kill your self-confidence
It wasn't so bad
Not until I met you
You built it up
So much so that it was too much to handle
It felt amazing,
But overwhelming
It was the first time that had happened in a long time
It was so strong
I felt as though I could fly
But then…
You destroyed it
The very thing that had been unachievable for years
I finally had it
But you being yourself,
Took it back
It was like stealing candy from a baby
All you had to was grab for it and it would be yours
And that's exactly what you did
Taking full advantage of the fact that I was weak
Please,
If I can't have your friendship,
At least give me my confidence again
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It's been said that despair is one of the writer's greatest drives for writing; in my opinion, the troubles we all face in relationships can walk side by side with that phrase, and even stand beside it as a secondary reason for why many of us write.
This poem had an informal feeling, but it was still a good write. I feel that the tone of the narration made the poem feel more realistic and easy to relate to for the readers. Good work!
=TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club and #LandoftheSky
Well Written, Well Worded, Well Placed Emotions, Well Done!
I think alot of people can relate to it.