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How did I let it get this bad?
I'm so ashamed
I should've seen it coming,
That you were going to hurt me this badly
That it's impossible for me to be loved,
Especially by you.
I can't even see your name and not cry
So what will this year bring?
Pain,
Longing,
But I had regained some hope near the end of last year,
Will you give me that again?
Or will you stay silent,
Making me go back into the darkness...
I can only hope that you'll help me,
Or at least,
Try to
I know you can save me,
But I know you won't
You're the one that hurt me
And what am I supposed to do,
When the one who hurt me...
Is the only one that can save me?
I'm so ashamed
I should've seen it coming,
That you were going to hurt me this badly
That it's impossible for me to be loved,
Especially by you.
I can't even see your name and not cry
So what will this year bring?
Pain,
Longing,
But I had regained some hope near the end of last year,
Will you give me that again?
Or will you stay silent,
Making me go back into the darkness...
I can only hope that you'll help me,
Or at least,
Try to
I know you can save me,
But I know you won't
You're the one that hurt me
And what am I supposed to do,
When the one who hurt me...
Is the only one that can save me?
Literature
Music equals Love
I 'll walk in time.
Count the beats in my head.
Chase the rhythm of my heart.
To love, I'll be led.
From melodies and songs,
And harmonizing sounds.
Love's waves of music,
Is where I'll be found.
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antagonistic, i have no pulse.
hold on.
hold onto what?
hold onto me, hold me,
when nothing else matters
because my arms are open 24/7
25/7 actually, even that extra hour
on the longest day of the year
because that's how special you are
(to me? i guess. but i never know
if i guess correctly or not)
"wait, did you say something important/poetic/meaningless?"
what.
"hold on a second, i'm busy."
well, i've never held onto a second;
time always slip through my fragile
fingertips. never held onto an hour
either. or an our. a your? fuck you
pronouns. just hold onto something
(i'm a thi
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I love you too
I hate hanging up on you after the way you say "I love you."
Somehow totally pronouncing the period while simply saying "I love you".
It's one of the constant feelings I have with you,
Leaving me mindlessly craving for more.
I love how your voice strikes my inner sides,
But not how it happens to take over my mind.
And it never seems to strike alone because of my love for you,
A love I risk to trust in all the beautiful lies.
So I try to savor your words in my mind,
The way your voice holds my heart away,
The river of longing lit by your smile,
Every moment of what we have.
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So I was helping out at my school with band stuff and had to run to the office for something, but I wanted to stop in the actual band room to see if something was still there and I was fine until I saw this guys' name on the white board and then I almost broke down and cried. I thought I was healing, and I thought that I was coming close to being over him...but I guess I was wrong. So then while I was sitting in the car driving my sister back to school I was thinking about what had happened and then this came.
Comments/Critique much appreciated! Any kind...not even kidding
Comments/Critique much appreciated! Any kind...not even kidding
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All of your poetry seems to take the same form: Many lines of consistently inconsistent length without break and without rhyme. Expression is great, but you should try to start forming it and crafting it into different shapes.